I tried to run as fast as I could so I wouldn't be apprehended. I dashed and tried to find my way out into a safe place where no one could see me, so I wouldn't be hit with pillows and teddy bears. Even if they were small, they had already a conspiracy against my rules.
I'm suppose to be the boss of this place. Where my rules have to be followed with no one who would dare to protest. But as the gang of the chocolate chip cookies and "I want to watch Discovery Kids" comes in, my world becomes an anarchy. They become the bosses of what use to be my world. But when eight thirty strikes on the clock that hangs on the wall, the gang drops to the bed and sleep. Thats when peace comes back again.
God, I hate babysitting!
I like how you started with a catchy beginning!! I really think its "I'm supposed" but it still sounds right if i read yours out... But everything's great other than that:DDD
ReplyDeleteI love your use of the words and your description! :P
ReplyDeleteI like how you started, that encourages me to continue reading!!
ReplyDeleteIt looks like a horror story!!:)
Great job:)
Nice story and good description
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you applied the words to your story, it was a little bit confusing at first but at the end it was clear. Good job, it is original!
ReplyDeleteGreat story! It really made me laugh. Awesome job with no spelling mistakes (That I, the horrible speller I am) can find. Nice! Hahaha but your sooooooo good with kids :)
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